Lizardman's art journey to glory!
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yes its better, you made the jaw bigger, the nose looks nicer

his eyes are narrower and sexier, his lips are less big, the indication of teeth line isnt attractive, his hair has volume and structure. the contour of his face on the side isnt as curved and whimsical. look how you indicated the cheekbone, it goes out in out again. When i see the photo, its out, then a diagonal line to the bottom of his jaw

give it antoher shot, i know its hard and frustration, but you already leveled up just doing it a second time, give it another go try to fix those little things

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RE: Lizardman's art journey to glory! - by Izzual - 07-15-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: Lizardman's art journey to glory! - by John - 03-05-2017, 01:13 AM
RE: Lizardman's art journey to glory! - by Fedodika - 11-18-2019, 06:51 AM
RE: Lizardman's art journey to glory! - by 879 - 11-18-2019, 07:23 AM
RE: Lizardman's art journey to glory! - by 879 - 11-19-2019, 04:31 PM
RE: Lizardman's art journey to glory! - by John - 11-23-2019, 01:33 AM
RE: Lizardman's art journey to glory! - by wld.89 - 12-11-2020, 05:31 AM

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