11-23-2019, 09:24 PM
Alright! Starting strong! whoa! They definitively have the looks of concept art / storyboard I've seen around on people! Quality mark.
Okay so the best I'd say is that everything reads well, like the sense of space is there. Is true I think some more perspective and less using just overlap but I dunno, that one with the woman staring at a painting looks so nice! But also it feels to me like she is on a ramp going up? And the painting then is rotated slightly (more like is not leveled, is slanted) I dunno though! Maybe it's something I'm seeing wrong. But the walls also feel slanting inwards, not sure if on purpose or what architecture are you going for! It goes beyond my expertise.
I would say I like your approaches to some colors, but at the same time I feel you do a lot of grayscale first then add color on top? Then some feel off, like the girl with the character killing another on the first ones out put up, it's like she is glowing (her overall value is too bright), is good for depth that she doesn't has as much contrast but I would check that out, like the local values of many parts of her should be different and darker, I feel. On that one also I think I personally would love to see more of the assailant? Like right now can't tell if it's a monster, alien, robot or another person on a suit. But the framing is really good for the action, so if it's part of a sequence then stay course.
The design of the girl headpiece on that one is really cool, I like that design a lot! Her pose could be a bit better, proportions maybe too, but that's a personal thing, to show the design it works well! So again, only if you want more illustration/character focus, check a bit more the acting side, if not stay with that.
Overall I'm really impressed! Awesome stuff. I wish one day I can pull those off myself.
Okay so the best I'd say is that everything reads well, like the sense of space is there. Is true I think some more perspective and less using just overlap but I dunno, that one with the woman staring at a painting looks so nice! But also it feels to me like she is on a ramp going up? And the painting then is rotated slightly (more like is not leveled, is slanted) I dunno though! Maybe it's something I'm seeing wrong. But the walls also feel slanting inwards, not sure if on purpose or what architecture are you going for! It goes beyond my expertise.
I would say I like your approaches to some colors, but at the same time I feel you do a lot of grayscale first then add color on top? Then some feel off, like the girl with the character killing another on the first ones out put up, it's like she is glowing (her overall value is too bright), is good for depth that she doesn't has as much contrast but I would check that out, like the local values of many parts of her should be different and darker, I feel. On that one also I think I personally would love to see more of the assailant? Like right now can't tell if it's a monster, alien, robot or another person on a suit. But the framing is really good for the action, so if it's part of a sequence then stay course.
The design of the girl headpiece on that one is really cool, I like that design a lot! Her pose could be a bit better, proportions maybe too, but that's a personal thing, to show the design it works well! So again, only if you want more illustration/character focus, check a bit more the acting side, if not stay with that.
Overall I'm really impressed! Awesome stuff. I wish one day I can pull those off myself.