01-06-2020, 05:32 AM
Great stuff man! You got a great sense for values.
One thing I noticed about the lineart stuff is that you had some tangents in there. Try to avoid theese at ALL COST! They remove a lot of the depth in your drawings.
May I also suggest some more line weight? Lines that come in front should be thicker then the one in the back (this may be a stylistic choice from your side tho, in that case, feel free to ignore this crit )
One thing I noticed about the lineart stuff is that you had some tangents in there. Try to avoid theese at ALL COST! They remove a lot of the depth in your drawings.
May I also suggest some more line weight? Lines that come in front should be thicker then the one in the back (this may be a stylistic choice from your side tho, in that case, feel free to ignore this crit )