03-19-2020, 10:53 PM
His hands feel better pose wise definitely but theyre still kinda small, i think a big selling point of his pose is his hands on the handle so id make em a tad bigger. (also consider making his face more expressive, he looks remarkably quaint for flying a motorcycle through the sky)
https://www.prostaffpt.com/wp-content/up...24x683.jpg
really go for the anatomy on it, strong knuckles sell a strong grip on something
You fixed a lot on the plane, i still think the back landing tires are too big, the forward one feels about right. The sucker things on the side are also closer but keep messing with them because the symmetry is still bugging me. Maybe download sketchup and do a simple blockout of the plane so you can see how the perspective would work, its a free 3d software and easy to use, you could figure it out in about 15 minutes. :)
https://www.prostaffpt.com/wp-content/up...24x683.jpg
really go for the anatomy on it, strong knuckles sell a strong grip on something
You fixed a lot on the plane, i still think the back landing tires are too big, the forward one feels about right. The sucker things on the side are also closer but keep messing with them because the symmetry is still bugging me. Maybe download sketchup and do a simple blockout of the plane so you can see how the perspective would work, its a free 3d software and easy to use, you could figure it out in about 15 minutes. :)
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]