04-09-2020, 02:30 PM
I don't want to throw you in all direction but i think you need to observe color more your color are less satured than what i see in my book(megaman).I think right now what you need to practice is line economy it the concept of avoiding chicken scratch what is chicken scratch it when your use multiple stroke instead of fluid and confident line.How do you practice line economy?You focus your attention in visualizing your line before you put it on the paper with a method call ghosting.What is ghosting?Ghosting in the same way a carpenter prepare is hammer before he strike it first he locate where he want the hammer to go and he do some fake strike to allign is hammer to the nail.In a similar way you prepare your pen by hovering over the paper or tablet and once you feel your have the line how you want it you put the pen down and voila.The secret is to avoid sprinting to the finishing line and to understand how to control your tool and how to use your arm.