Need Critique (and paintover)
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Thanks. Her face does bother me. I’m not sure if I rendered it well enough compared to her arms. Like it looks pale.

Her hair as well. I mean, it looks ok but I feel like it could be better. Looking at it again now, it does look kinda flat on the right side. I feel like the rim light made that side look flat.

Does there need to be any folds on her brown cloth thing? I didn’t wanna make it too pronounced, I figured it was like a tough material like some buffalo skin/leather or whatever. I should have looked up some reference for leather material but I too got lazy. I wasn’t as invested in this piece tbh.

I also wanted to give her eyes a bit more of a blue glow but It didn’t look all that pretty so I turned the opacity down.
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Need Critique (and paintover) - by Duke Lawalevu - 04-18-2020, 01:37 PM
RE: Need Critique (and paintover) - by Duke Lawalevu - 04-18-2020, 11:09 PM
RE: Need Critique (and paintover) - by John - 04-20-2020, 12:49 AM
RE: Need Critique (and paintover) - by Dahlia - 04-20-2020, 03:47 AM

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