05-03-2020, 07:05 AM
(05-03-2020, 04:20 AM)bonjidogen Wrote: Hey there, really like your art! First thing that comes to mind when I see the clean/final concepts is that you put in a lot of thought into them!
If you want some feedback from me, I think that the composition on the restaurant and Sr. Vete is a bit confusing. The amount of detail on Sr. Vete draws my eye to the icecream balls on their body equally, and it feels like there is no central focus I should pay attention to? Similarly for the restaurant: it is overall fairly clean, but the rock texture around the building may be visually "too heavy" and draws attention away from the overall concept.
Thanks for the feedback and the compliment! And yes they took me a while to clean and give it similar lines and style, so it wouldnt look too different when putting into the prototype.
I see what you mean, i think the rocks in the restaurante might get a bit more hidden once i color (cus i will color the lineart i just know which colors yet) but i will keep it in mind for future changes, or i might just change the rocks if still gets confusing. As for Sr.Vete ill see what i can change on it, i didn't notice but he does look very simetric mainly on the body details... luckly this is just the initial concept so i'll try different stuff! Thank you!