05-04-2020, 08:21 AM
Well you keep going man! I can see the girls faces most have improved, the man with the tie and suit, I think it worked before also, as a cartoony approach maybe (in proportions talk) but now while proportions are better the rendering and edges don't work as well (feels a bit doll-like with make up and big eyes?) and bottom one, girl with spiky bands, before might have been less "appealing" for woman looks but she reads like a unique individual and also more realistic european sort of vibe while now is more generic, standard eastern looks, both work for me.
Of course you are the one driving, you gotta decide where you are heading and if you aren't getting there, like we all do. Making things more abstract and simpler does give you a measure of appeal, but it ain't just enough (I'm learning that quite the hard way myself). I like that you are pushing yourself and striving towards something, so really keep going man! Onward! What are you pursuing to improve at next?
Of course you are the one driving, you gotta decide where you are heading and if you aren't getting there, like we all do. Making things more abstract and simpler does give you a measure of appeal, but it ain't just enough (I'm learning that quite the hard way myself). I like that you are pushing yourself and striving towards something, so really keep going man! Onward! What are you pursuing to improve at next?