05-05-2020, 06:11 AM
Hmm, I think to me the point that makes me wonder most is the creature eye, right now is very human like, which on one side gets a friendlier, trustworthy vibe (more relatable?) but on the other hand might make it look a bit uncanny? I can't say yet, depends on how you render it I guess, it could be also a placement/size/underlying skull anatomy thing?
You could maybe expand on if they are saying farewell or greeting one another somehow, maybe like play with the background castle, if its on fire or destroyed could be a sign of leaving or escaping, while a brighter or sunnier could be a greeting but you would get the read mostly on the woman's reaction face I guess, the kind of smile she would do, right now she's a bit neutral but also could be seen as somewhat sad?
Oh also maybe hint the woman's other arm somewhere, easiest would be to just show some bit of the upper arm going towards the other side of the monster but it could go down or put on the railing.
Forgot to say but the previous one, got rock solid read overall! Only thing I caught on it maybe is the nearest foot? Floating a tad because the stone below seems to go sloping meanwhile the foot goes flat angle? You could shadow the area somewhat or change the texture direction (the toes mainly).
Keep it up!
You could maybe expand on if they are saying farewell or greeting one another somehow, maybe like play with the background castle, if its on fire or destroyed could be a sign of leaving or escaping, while a brighter or sunnier could be a greeting but you would get the read mostly on the woman's reaction face I guess, the kind of smile she would do, right now she's a bit neutral but also could be seen as somewhat sad?
Oh also maybe hint the woman's other arm somewhere, easiest would be to just show some bit of the upper arm going towards the other side of the monster but it could go down or put on the railing.
Forgot to say but the previous one, got rock solid read overall! Only thing I caught on it maybe is the nearest foot? Floating a tad because the stone below seems to go sloping meanwhile the foot goes flat angle? You could shadow the area somewhat or change the texture direction (the toes mainly).
Keep it up!