Mess of ideas
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Oh, well it's a nice detail to have weapons be effective depending on the creatures food.
Just to clarify, because I reread my comment and I see why it was misleading ha ha, I was trying to say give them a catchy phrase or sound to enhance the pun. Like lemon toad, could do a "citric" sound instead of "ribbit" like frogs are usually represented as? It's not a great one and ha, it's a toad not a frog but so you catch my drift? Stuff like that, maybe on your language there's thing like that, or like Sr.Vete could be all the time saying "I shan't be kept waiting!", like a very spoiled villain but it makes sense because is made of icecream and if they wait they would go runny lol. Dunno! If you can pull stuff like that you might get not just smiles but a few chuckles, enhances the atmosphere. It's a good hook.

I would say from the last one, ui wise you should bring back the food themes to it, hearts, gold, alchemy/chemistry glassware might not be an interesting/as fun fit. Keep it up!
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Mess of ideas - by Gkatsura - 05-03-2020, 12:11 AM
RE: Mess of ideas - by bonjidogen - 05-03-2020, 04:20 AM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Gkatsura - 05-03-2020, 07:05 AM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Rotohail - 05-04-2020, 08:29 AM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Gkatsura - 05-04-2020, 09:59 PM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Gkatsura - 05-04-2020, 10:17 PM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Rotohail - 05-05-2020, 06:18 AM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Gkatsura - 05-06-2020, 01:29 AM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Artloader - 05-06-2020, 07:54 AM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Gkatsura - 05-06-2020, 10:01 PM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Gkatsura - 06-15-2020, 10:19 PM
RE: Mess of ideas - by chubby_cat - 06-18-2020, 02:41 PM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Gkatsura - 06-21-2020, 10:17 PM
RE: Mess of ideas - by cgmythology - 06-21-2020, 10:51 PM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Gkatsura - 06-24-2020, 12:54 AM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Zorrentos - 03-16-2021, 04:20 PM
RE: Mess of ideas - by Gkatsura - 03-16-2021, 10:03 PM

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