05-11-2020, 01:30 AM
darktiste: I reworked the image to make it more intimate, hope it's better now!
Fedodika: That's true regarding the profile view, I wanted to make sure both figures expressions are shown and that was the simplest choice, although maybe not the most dynamic. Excellent point regarding the composition, I reworked it so the castle is much more 'back' and smaller in scale, should help more depth! Thank you kindly for the tutorials and resources as well, very much appreciate it!
Rotohail: I reworked the eyes and poses a bit, have them both closed now to make it a bit more emotional. I want the image to appear quite calm, so I think I'll avoid destruction on this one as that would conflict with the vibe I'm going for! I added the woman's arm as well, a bit hard to see but I think it's a solid addition, thanks for your suggestion and input!
Public Enemy: Thanks! I reworked the eyes, decided to keep all of them closed for now!
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I reworked the sketch a bit based on the suggestions, decided to have them embracing more and have their eyes closed, which makes the image a bit more intimate. I'm pleased with the sketch so I went ahead and began the painting process, here is the current preview:
Any input is always welcome as always :)
Fedodika: That's true regarding the profile view, I wanted to make sure both figures expressions are shown and that was the simplest choice, although maybe not the most dynamic. Excellent point regarding the composition, I reworked it so the castle is much more 'back' and smaller in scale, should help more depth! Thank you kindly for the tutorials and resources as well, very much appreciate it!
Rotohail: I reworked the eyes and poses a bit, have them both closed now to make it a bit more emotional. I want the image to appear quite calm, so I think I'll avoid destruction on this one as that would conflict with the vibe I'm going for! I added the woman's arm as well, a bit hard to see but I think it's a solid addition, thanks for your suggestion and input!
Public Enemy: Thanks! I reworked the eyes, decided to keep all of them closed for now!
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I reworked the sketch a bit based on the suggestions, decided to have them embracing more and have their eyes closed, which makes the image a bit more intimate. I'm pleased with the sketch so I went ahead and began the painting process, here is the current preview:
Any input is always welcome as always :)