Tfantoni's Sketchbook

[Zorrentos]

The last sketch is looking quite nice, but I think you need to keep in mind more the kinetic forces of the image. She is moving very quickly into one direction and swinging over an obstacle with her leg. This should show more in the image (Her body should twist and "throw" the leg over the obstacle). Try to show this in the foreshortening of the leg.

Also, making "countermoves" into the other direction with her hair, any lose clothing etc can really help give the impression of quick movement. I made this very quick overpaint. Hope it helps :)