Darktiste Sketchbook

[Zorrentos]

Hey darktiste! Nice job on reaching such a milestone! You have made a lot of progress from page 1 to say the least, but there are still some fundamentals you seem to be lacking. Is there a special reason to why you do not use lineweight (atleast from what I can see). Some thicker lines on the overlapping shapes would probably help you a lot. 

Also, I know that it was not the focus of the last piece, but i strongly encourage you to go back and study perspective/gesture to improve your character concepts. The quality will go up a lot if you try to push the perspective the bit and think of the characters and concepts as actual 3D shapes in space (Made this quick drawing to show what I mean):




Keep posting! The progress so far has been really good, and I can tell you will go far if you keep it up!  

Edit: Posted wrong picture, sorry.