_spec's stinky sketchbook
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I think most of his parts are too similar in size like his knife blade is almost the same size as his head, and almost cuts on the same horizontal line of the canvas as his head. Id suggest making his blade much longer to contrast the shapes overall.

Also his pose is silly, but doesnt feel too involved. I think it kinda works for the cartoon style, but ultimately he could be way more engaged in what hes doing. Its like hes doing 4 things at once? hes kicking his legs out, hes throwing a green ball, hes screaming, and hes got a sword. Pick one thing and make the image about that action. Where's Waldo is a book where theres just too much to look at, it doesnt feel powerful gesture wise.

https://i.redd.it/f0hdwidwpmi31.jpg

See how his whole body is engaged in the action, always think of that when making a dynamic pose!

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_spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 04-19-2020, 03:28 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 04-19-2020, 04:09 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 04-20-2020, 02:44 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by JosephCow - 04-20-2020, 04:33 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by darktiste - 04-20-2020, 08:29 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 04-20-2020, 12:48 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 04-20-2020, 12:58 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Fedodika - 04-21-2020, 04:14 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by darktiste - 04-21-2020, 04:53 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 04-26-2020, 01:35 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Fedodika - 04-26-2020, 02:07 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 04-27-2020, 08:31 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Fedodika - 04-27-2020, 08:53 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 04-29-2020, 03:26 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-05-2020, 07:31 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-05-2020, 07:44 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Fedodika - 05-05-2020, 11:17 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-07-2020, 01:20 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Fedodika - 05-07-2020, 02:02 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-10-2020, 07:45 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Fedodika - 05-10-2020, 11:24 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-12-2020, 11:04 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-17-2020, 01:38 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-18-2020, 02:37 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Lugo - 05-18-2020, 05:12 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-19-2020, 06:57 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-22-2020, 07:31 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by JosephCow - 05-22-2020, 09:29 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-22-2020, 10:53 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-26-2020, 04:57 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by sgavrilles - 05-27-2020, 04:28 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-28-2020, 04:44 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Mylqin - 05-29-2020, 11:30 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-29-2020, 02:30 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-29-2020, 02:35 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Mylqin - 05-30-2020, 08:26 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-31-2020, 11:45 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 05-31-2020, 02:01 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 06-03-2020, 08:11 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Fedodika - 06-03-2020, 08:50 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 06-03-2020, 12:09 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 06-04-2020, 04:15 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 06-11-2020, 08:53 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Gliger - 06-11-2020, 09:26 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 07-04-2021, 12:13 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 07-04-2021, 12:21 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 07-04-2021, 12:39 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by one_two - 07-04-2021, 05:54 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 07-08-2021, 04:09 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 07-08-2021, 04:08 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 09-05-2021, 04:40 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Zorrentos - 09-07-2021, 02:11 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Daft Sketch - 09-12-2021, 08:53 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by cgmythology - 09-19-2021, 07:38 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 09-23-2021, 12:25 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 09-23-2021, 12:41 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by one_two - 09-23-2021, 03:08 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by cgmythology - 09-27-2021, 11:58 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 10-03-2021, 04:08 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by darktiste - 10-03-2021, 05:16 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Ben Nissen - 10-27-2021, 07:44 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 11-04-2021, 01:44 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 11-04-2021, 02:44 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 11-07-2021, 03:35 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 11-13-2021, 04:20 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 11-18-2021, 02:28 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by exartlurker - 11-19-2021, 09:03 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 11-23-2021, 02:03 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by AChi - 11-23-2021, 05:52 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 11-26-2021, 03:20 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by darktiste - 11-26-2021, 11:45 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 12-10-2021, 02:42 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by darktiste - 12-10-2021, 03:46 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 12-21-2021, 04:15 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 12-28-2021, 04:00 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Jephyr - 12-29-2021, 01:35 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 01-01-2022, 05:57 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Artloader - 01-02-2022, 02:57 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 01-09-2022, 12:29 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by JosephCow - 01-09-2022, 01:26 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Jephyr - 01-13-2022, 07:44 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 01-14-2022, 12:37 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 02-06-2022, 03:29 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Velt0n - 03-03-2022, 04:46 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Gulp86 - 03-03-2022, 06:23 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 03-07-2022, 07:15 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by mixedmax - 03-09-2022, 09:33 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 03-27-2022, 01:01 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by Damien Levs - 07-29-2022, 07:09 AM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by JosephCow - 07-29-2022, 01:36 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by one_two - 07-31-2022, 12:27 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by cgmythology - 07-31-2022, 07:43 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 10-03-2022, 12:58 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by _spec - 10-03-2022, 01:23 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by cgmythology - 10-05-2022, 11:41 PM
RE: _spec's stinky sketchbook - by lvlingArtist - 11-22-2022, 02:55 AM

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