06-18-2020, 10:56 AM
The head you done has weird proportions all over the place, it doesnt look like the features are sitting on any kind of skeletal structure. The nose looks like voldemorts nose. The ear is weirdly positioned and drawn, it doesnt look like an ear just looks like an oval with couple random lines inside. If you look at reference carefully you will see what i mean in a heart beat.
For your standing figure, again the anatomy is all broken. The pelvis looks like is disconnected and way too far away from the ribcage. The chest is way too tiny. The extended arm's mucles make no sense. The deltoid does not connect like that into the arm. Then again I cant even tell what position that arm is in. Is it facing down, or up.. That far leg makes no sense with the rest of the figure. His left upper arm is toooooooo tiny.
I'd recommend watching proko's beginner videos on anatomy and stuff you really really need it.
For your standing figure, again the anatomy is all broken. The pelvis looks like is disconnected and way too far away from the ribcage. The chest is way too tiny. The extended arm's mucles make no sense. The deltoid does not connect like that into the arm. Then again I cant even tell what position that arm is in. Is it facing down, or up.. That far leg makes no sense with the rest of the figure. His left upper arm is toooooooo tiny.
I'd recommend watching proko's beginner videos on anatomy and stuff you really really need it.
PORTFOLIO http://www.artstation.com/artist/Jeso
Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-2586.html
Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-2586.html