Making a graphic novel / manga

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In the background there is no water. Its more like grasslands or something. So maybe I should indicate that by putting some trees here and there, okay!

The straight line looks like the horizon on the sea. Make it more natural, slightly hilly maybe?
I like the humorous tone of page 3 - I hadn't guessed it from the previous pages. If this is the tone of the whole story, you may want to consider making it clear from page 1?

Its probably not the tone of the whole story. I am imagining the story as an anime, so thats why I made the "fighting scene" look that way. Most likely there are 100 other ways to do the same thing slightly better.

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I would guess that this user is a bot.



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Here is Page 4:




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Also, I made a Youtube Channel for the project, possibly not the most fitting format to present pictures, but YT is the only one I myself use to look at stuff. I am not very social media.

I post Studies there and also each new page for this graphic novel.

So here is the Channel itself:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCXIq7za...g/featured

And here is the playlist of these pages, starting with page 1:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tYEg--cU...qJ&index=2

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