06-29-2020, 12:34 PM
Welcome to CD. Great start to your sketchbook!
You've already received some great critique but I thought I'd add my two cents in and just say to be more cautious with your proportions going forth, especially in the arm section. Using your third image as an example; the hands are not really relative to the arms, they look like they belong to someone else. The hands are massive for how skinny the arms are, but the arms are also just too small for the body in general. Also, with the glove on the left arm (our right) follow the part near the elbow that is supposed to come to a point. Those two lines should eventually meet, but in your image they aren't there and the angle doesn't warrant the possibility of them meeting behind her arm where we can't see.
It's mainly in that image where the issues lie, so it's just something to think about with your drawings going forwards.
Keep it up and looking forward to seeing more from you.
You've already received some great critique but I thought I'd add my two cents in and just say to be more cautious with your proportions going forth, especially in the arm section. Using your third image as an example; the hands are not really relative to the arms, they look like they belong to someone else. The hands are massive for how skinny the arms are, but the arms are also just too small for the body in general. Also, with the glove on the left arm (our right) follow the part near the elbow that is supposed to come to a point. Those two lines should eventually meet, but in your image they aren't there and the angle doesn't warrant the possibility of them meeting behind her arm where we can't see.
It's mainly in that image where the issues lie, so it's just something to think about with your drawings going forwards.
Keep it up and looking forward to seeing more from you.