(07-04-2020, 08:34 AM)darktiste Wrote: I think it would add visual story telling if you would actually show abit of some kind of magic glow around those item because right now the story telling isn't quiet there yet in my own opinion.Adding that surnatural glow help the viewer understand it not simply object falling or attach on a string.
I agree — the storytelling aspect is something I'm struggling with but will work on image by image, I think writing a short piece about what I want to draw before just diving into it will help with this.