07-09-2020, 09:35 AM
It's progressed really well. Good job!
I third Fedo and second darktiste, haha. With the lighting, it's quite harsh. There's also a few nitpicks over it; like shouldn't (presuming the light is coming from top left, because that is where it is brightest) the helmet cast more of a shadow over her forehead? Her ear is actually the first thing my eyes are drawn to; there's a lot of darker values in comparison around it. Ears are (typically) quite flat, so adding a highlight to the helix gives it the feeling of her having sticking out ears. Which isn't a bad thing, but to have it that bright, the ear would need to stick out a lot.
The cloth around her back feels very flat because all the folds are constricted in this sort of overall bounding box shape. It would be nice to see if flow, like in the front.
Those are just nitpicks though. Otherwise it's looking super good and I've enjoyed seeing the progress of it.
I third Fedo and second darktiste, haha. With the lighting, it's quite harsh. There's also a few nitpicks over it; like shouldn't (presuming the light is coming from top left, because that is where it is brightest) the helmet cast more of a shadow over her forehead? Her ear is actually the first thing my eyes are drawn to; there's a lot of darker values in comparison around it. Ears are (typically) quite flat, so adding a highlight to the helix gives it the feeling of her having sticking out ears. Which isn't a bad thing, but to have it that bright, the ear would need to stick out a lot.
The cloth around her back feels very flat because all the folds are constricted in this sort of overall bounding box shape. It would be nice to see if flow, like in the front.
Those are just nitpicks though. Otherwise it's looking super good and I've enjoyed seeing the progress of it.