Great sketchbook CGMythology — really nice to see you work towards your finished pieces. I think you've done a good job with the linework on your latest image but there a few things that stand out to me as a bit off.
The perspective of the rock the dragon is standing on seems skewed? I'd say this for the top of the staff as well, I can't tell if it's meant to be symmetrical or not — if not maybe try and make it more 'designed' to be that way. The tangent of the wing touching the other wing could be an easy fix to get a more readable silhouette too.
The last thing I can see in a few of your pieces is your tendency to stick with either full front or full sideways poses (on the last piece you even made it that way) — I think one thing that could bring some dynamics to your illustrations would be more three-quarter views from different angles, imagine how sweet the dragon would look if it were towering above the woman and we were looking up at it.
All that aside you are definitely working towards being better and you can tell as you flick through the pages — exciting!
The perspective of the rock the dragon is standing on seems skewed? I'd say this for the top of the staff as well, I can't tell if it's meant to be symmetrical or not — if not maybe try and make it more 'designed' to be that way. The tangent of the wing touching the other wing could be an easy fix to get a more readable silhouette too.
The last thing I can see in a few of your pieces is your tendency to stick with either full front or full sideways poses (on the last piece you even made it that way) — I think one thing that could bring some dynamics to your illustrations would be more three-quarter views from different angles, imagine how sweet the dragon would look if it were towering above the woman and we were looking up at it.
All that aside you are definitely working towards being better and you can tell as you flick through the pages — exciting!