07-14-2020, 02:15 PM
Cool new piece, cg. Just a couple of things to note:
Her ribs are very intense. While you can see the ribcage on some thin women, it's often made of softer forms. Whereas yours give off the feel of hard edges, which would only be possible with emaciation
The contrast between her shoulder and her (outstretched) arm is very intense and it makes her arm feel like a cylinder (but I feel like this part is still a work in progress?)
The dragon fire spans more area than it should. It's coming out of its mouth, but there's orange flames/heat up around its face. You would expect dragon fire to be more like in a funnel shape; thin at the origin and larger at the end. Check out the dragon's breathing fire from Game of Thrones; they are pretty good examples.
Her ribs are very intense. While you can see the ribcage on some thin women, it's often made of softer forms. Whereas yours give off the feel of hard edges, which would only be possible with emaciation
The contrast between her shoulder and her (outstretched) arm is very intense and it makes her arm feel like a cylinder (but I feel like this part is still a work in progress?)
The dragon fire spans more area than it should. It's coming out of its mouth, but there's orange flames/heat up around its face. You would expect dragon fire to be more like in a funnel shape; thin at the origin and larger at the end. Check out the dragon's breathing fire from Game of Thrones; they are pretty good examples.