07-17-2020, 07:48 AM
Really awesome workload you have, so much stuff. Illustrations, studies sketches, more finished stuff it's all there. Had a little bit of feedback on the space image with the whale I hope you don't mind. I really like the way the whale has been done, but I felt like it wasn't standing out so much. I lightened the values up a little bit on the left smaller planet just to let that whales' silhouette work a little bit better - easy fix. The other thing I noticed (it's more noticeable if zoomed out and looking as a thumbnail) is the whale's fin/"arm" does echo the planet behind him a little bit too much. Looking at the image super fast almost makes it look like the outline of the planet, so i'd probably either move the planet just a bit or change the fin/arm slightly to combat that echoing effect just a little bit. It's a cool concept and the whale has been done beautifully!
Lastly I did change the right wing of the front ship just a little bit as it was lining up perfectly with (contour and gesture) with the whales tail section.
Can't wait to see more, thanks for sharing :D
Lastly I did change the right wing of the front ship just a little bit as it was lining up perfectly with (contour and gesture) with the whales tail section.
Can't wait to see more, thanks for sharing :D