07-23-2020, 07:52 PM
OK, so i really like the design of this piece
I just had a play with where I would take it if it were my own
I played with the size and shape of the cloth and sword but other than that it was mostly a bit of push pull, trying to add a bit of depth and bring attention to particular moments in the painting.
i think the tiny addition of highlights giving it that bit of glow goes a long way, as well as giving the gems and eye a bit more variance in texture.
very minimally worked on some tangents, sometimes you dont need to move the stuff as much as just distinguish it from whats next to it by value or detail.
I pointed to eye towards the hammer to keep the viewer cycling around the main areas of interest
rather than looking off the page somewhere.
adjusted the open finger just little to give a slight bit more interest n the negative space there
It maybe just wanted a tad more strength and weight, guiding through focal points and a bit of pop with some glow, breaking up the consistent form rendering
just my take on things anyway
hope its of use in some way. Really like the piece
portfolio material for sure
![[Image: po_ogjinsha_by_andrew_gibbons_de1uon8-pr...Jebuci3URg]](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/0444150d-aa18-4a8b-98b7-520f91088ed5/de1uon8-3d300b75-e13f-4a1a-913f-1c64c681cb21.jpg/v1/fill/w_815,h_980,q_70,strp/po_ogjinsha_by_andrew_gibbons_de1uon8-pre.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOiIsImlzcyI6InVybjphcHA6Iiwib2JqIjpbW3siaGVpZ2h0IjoiPD0xNTM4IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvMDQ0NDE1MGQtYWExOC00YThiLTk4YjctNTIwZjkxMDg4ZWQ1XC9kZTF1b244LTNkMzAwYjc1LWUxM2YtNGExYS05MTNmLTFjNjRjNjgxY2IyMS5qcGciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9MTI4MCJ9XV0sImF1ZCI6WyJ1cm46c2VydmljZTppbWFnZS5vcGVyYXRpb25zIl19.mXLymVj8oIekeD3i8WTTyqLcVa8pftkv5Jebuci3URg)
Gif version to see exactly where i altered it
![[Image: de1uoni-77ffff05-7e74-4277-a36c-a3e42b97...gyYpkt23BI]](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/0444150d-aa18-4a8b-98b7-520f91088ed5/de1uoni-77ffff05-7e74-4277-a36c-a3e42b97eca2.gif?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOiIsImlzcyI6InVybjphcHA6Iiwib2JqIjpbW3sicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvMDQ0NDE1MGQtYWExOC00YThiLTk4YjctNTIwZjkxMDg4ZWQ1XC9kZTF1b25pLTc3ZmZmZjA1LTdlNzQtNDI3Ny1hMzZjLWEzZTQyYjk3ZWNhMi5naWYifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6ZmlsZS5kb3dubG9hZCJdfQ.BX9Iow0f-I66E2XlJMrk6ErZY9eiXW1-wgyYpkt23BI)
I just had a play with where I would take it if it were my own
I played with the size and shape of the cloth and sword but other than that it was mostly a bit of push pull, trying to add a bit of depth and bring attention to particular moments in the painting.
i think the tiny addition of highlights giving it that bit of glow goes a long way, as well as giving the gems and eye a bit more variance in texture.
very minimally worked on some tangents, sometimes you dont need to move the stuff as much as just distinguish it from whats next to it by value or detail.
I pointed to eye towards the hammer to keep the viewer cycling around the main areas of interest
rather than looking off the page somewhere.
adjusted the open finger just little to give a slight bit more interest n the negative space there
It maybe just wanted a tad more strength and weight, guiding through focal points and a bit of pop with some glow, breaking up the consistent form rendering
just my take on things anyway
hope its of use in some way. Really like the piece
portfolio material for sure
Gif version to see exactly where i altered it