07-27-2020, 09:20 PM
really cool stuff and well rendered too
I think the way his shoe offset from this leg is a nice touch
just something to consider is the amount of attention several elements vie for attention
the glowing eye, respirator filter that resembles an eye and effectively acts as one in terms of attention grabbing power, the candle and to a lesser extent the cross
all have a similar amount of attention pull for me
this is just a possible way you could go
taking the glow from has eyes may help the feel of anonymity
he at the moment has quite evil looking eyes that feel more appropriate with a mindless look or enraged, less thoughtful as i feel the rest of him portrays as this doctor character.
its very subtle but i tried to wrap the blue rim light in a bit less uniform way
i think you could craft some of the shapes within the element a bit more thoughtfully
looking at it now, i would also add a touch of blue glare off the glass tube also. the blue light direction
looked a bit inconsistent, not such a bit deal maybe but the benefits of a bit more attention i think would be worth it.
the staff, legs and tube strap are all super skinny, cool but gives it little bit less shape contrast that overall reduces interest points
Just my thoughts, if my critiques get annoying just say so and i will refrain lol
I think you could have a really nice portfolio with these designs.
keep up the good shiiiet
I think the way his shoe offset from this leg is a nice touch
just something to consider is the amount of attention several elements vie for attention
the glowing eye, respirator filter that resembles an eye and effectively acts as one in terms of attention grabbing power, the candle and to a lesser extent the cross
all have a similar amount of attention pull for me
this is just a possible way you could go
taking the glow from has eyes may help the feel of anonymity
he at the moment has quite evil looking eyes that feel more appropriate with a mindless look or enraged, less thoughtful as i feel the rest of him portrays as this doctor character.
its very subtle but i tried to wrap the blue rim light in a bit less uniform way
i think you could craft some of the shapes within the element a bit more thoughtfully
looking at it now, i would also add a touch of blue glare off the glass tube also. the blue light direction
looked a bit inconsistent, not such a bit deal maybe but the benefits of a bit more attention i think would be worth it.
the staff, legs and tube strap are all super skinny, cool but gives it little bit less shape contrast that overall reduces interest points
Just my thoughts, if my critiques get annoying just say so and i will refrain lol
I think you could have a really nice portfolio with these designs.
keep up the good shiiiet