07-31-2020, 10:12 AM
(07-31-2020, 04:08 AM)Zorrentos Wrote: I gathered them in this quick overpaint/oversketch.
Thank you very much. This is very appreciated.
I will re-do that one in the future.
also I have questions:
1. how would you "study composition"? I have the book "framed ink", which I guess is really good, but I do not know what in the "studying" of the book/composition the "milestones" are, that I have to reach. Do you know them? How do I determine if I am "better" now or not? Its not like "lesson 1 do this. lesson 2 do this. lesson 3 do this."
2. I am thinking that I can "overdo" it. By that I mean, for example the picture you corrected, is not a major point in the story. Should I anyways make all of the pictures, whereever I can make them as good looking as it is possible? that may make some pretty meaningless scenes come across as very important, doesnt it? I dont know.
Maybe its always good to have every picture as goodlooking as possible, could be the case also, i dont know...
But definitely you are right with the point you made, your sketch is better!
(but I am very happy, seeing in your sketch, that my sketch completely conveyed the idea I wanted it to! :) )
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