09-16-2012, 05:00 AM
Nice progress, I feel like something you are greatly lacking right now is use and knowledge of color. Honestly that's fine since you should be focusing on value at the moment anyway, but it seems a lot of the skin tones you do are incredibly desaturated. Try and really focus on matching colors of skins before you start to paint it on to the canvas, skin color often has a high saturation. But you shouldn't have to worry about color at the moment, focus on nailing values and once you're ready move on :) Keep posting