could anyone offer an opinion?

[benjaminbach]

Ok Frankie - so - first thing I noticed was the fact that the proportions/pose of the character feels off - so I'd check some reference on that. It seems to me that she has proportions of a dwarf as it is. I did a little paintover to warm myself up - so here goes:



So basicly - your picure has great potential - you have great rendering on her armor, great color palette and your concept is fine - just sit down and take the time it takes. Get the reference you want for the pose, figure out how the picture should feel - fix the things I've written/painted down on the paintover, and you're on your way to your next fantasy portfolio-piece.

Hope it helped.
/Benjamin