09-13-2020, 12:12 PM
hey, you got some good things going on here.
some things that stick out that could use attention is some inconsistent lighting, some need for stronger shape design and controlling of elements to aid composition a little more deliberately.
some of the colored over black and grey has a bit of a lifelessness to it and could use some painting on top to bring back some richness.
anyway keep moving, on and up!
some things that stick out that could use attention is some inconsistent lighting, some need for stronger shape design and controlling of elements to aid composition a little more deliberately.
some of the colored over black and grey has a bit of a lifelessness to it and could use some painting on top to bring back some richness.
anyway keep moving, on and up!