I would love some help xD - illustration

[joerdenleigh]

I have a feeling i've looked at it too long for me to be able to see whats wrong, any help at all would be nice.

Hey there did a draw over!




So, a couple things id do here is make sure your using the rule of thirds. First thing my eye saw was her giant for shortened boot :P I did have trouble fitting the guy in , having him right next to a foreshortened object has alot of weight and importance to the eye because our eyes are trained to find figures first. All i did though was play with scale and size. I would take him out entirely or find away to integrate him into the composition. I'm sure you have a specific scale in mind base on what this is from or the story. Another thing is where the archer is looking that makes a huge difference . If you look at old renaissance art a lot of the time they use figures looking in one specific direction to draw your eye.

The arrows are flamed yes , but red or warm colors draw our eyes like spice, as red on a primitive level means blood . My hard care opinion would be focus on the narritive and forge the bars as they are a very clear shape but that's my two cents.

What I really liked was the way the archer was faced and the fact my eye followed the arrows being shot at him.

Alright! its up to you, but that's what I saw and my feed back! Good luck !