JyonnyNovice - from Novice to Master!
Zorrentos Thanks for the comment/feedback/paintover! I should've posted more progress on that cover since I was further along, but pretty much went the route you were suggesting anyway. 

The second character behind her is more subdued to try and be more comedic, like he's doing a double take type of thing while she's 'ready for danger' but totally facing the wrong way.

I cropped out the werewolf a bit, since I thought the character's could be a bit bigger on the page. Making them smaller and the werewolf bigger would make things more oppressive/threatening but I want to show the characters too. 

I pretty much hate it at this point >.< feels like there's a ton of opportunity I'm missing out on but not really sure where to focus. I like the character poses, I dislike the werewolf, it feels to me like no improvement on the thumbnail, even that it's worse now I added detail. I like the giant moon/circle shape.

Desperately looking for feedback if anyone has any suggestions ^^



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RE: JyonnyNovice - from Novice to Master! - by JyonnyNovice - 11-11-2020, 01:21 AM

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