typhoneus's Sketchbook

[Zorrentos]

Your creature looks interesting, but it's hard to read the shapes. You should try to set up a perspective grid first, and then carefully draw out your creature. For designs like this, it's probably a good idea to limit details to a smaller area and leave big areas open for contrast.

I also suggest we make the challenge bi-weekly instead to give more people the time to join and finalize their designs. One week is quite a harsh deadline for most people.