01-18-2021, 03:55 PM
The bucket sketches look great, honestly. Especially the one middle right. Even with something so simple there is design to it, and some of these drawings look pretty well researched and like they could be good assets for a game. So yeah, honestly some nice drawings.
The rendered bucket is a little odd to me, though. You've shown in your sketches buckets with the metal binding having form and wrapping around. But then in the rendering you've shown the bindings all wavy and they don't wrap around the form at all, and the ellipse of the bottom of the bucket feels a little shallow. And then since the sides slope inwards, the lines between the wood should also follow that, but you drew them perfectly vertical on the inside of the bucket. So it's a little inconsistent.
I hope you don't take it as me nitpicking it apart, it's just that you've shown mastery of all of those things in your sketches, but then the rendered version seems like it was drawn by a different artist tbh. I'm not saying it was! I'm just saying a lot of the sense of form of the sketches isn't there in the rendering.
The rendered bucket is a little odd to me, though. You've shown in your sketches buckets with the metal binding having form and wrapping around. But then in the rendering you've shown the bindings all wavy and they don't wrap around the form at all, and the ellipse of the bottom of the bucket feels a little shallow. And then since the sides slope inwards, the lines between the wood should also follow that, but you drew them perfectly vertical on the inside of the bucket. So it's a little inconsistent.
I hope you don't take it as me nitpicking it apart, it's just that you've shown mastery of all of those things in your sketches, but then the rendered version seems like it was drawn by a different artist tbh. I'm not saying it was! I'm just saying a lot of the sense of form of the sketches isn't there in the rendering.