critique wanted
#6
Hi! I see you wanted to show that those people far away from viewer get smaller due to perspective, that's good! Be careful here, though. See, you have figures standing more or less in thr same line but they are too different in sizes. The group in the left upper corner looks too tiny, like they are children or gnomes :D

Another important thing I noticed is that the creature has a distinct top view while people are in different plane. My guess was that you planned perspective in which people are depicted so here I tried to fit the creature in it. https://imgur.com/a/25WkU4f

I struggle with perspective, too. I find it very helpful to imitate drawing scene on the table next to the monitor. Like you could take box(creature) and put small boxes(people) or any other small things around it. You can make boxes of paper if you don't have any.
Reply


Messages In This Thread
critique wanted - by loganwilliams - 01-13-2021, 08:21 AM
RE: critique wanted - by darktiste - 01-13-2021, 12:24 PM
RE: critique wanted - by loganwilliams - 01-13-2021, 01:02 PM
RE: critique wanted - by darktiste - 01-13-2021, 03:10 PM
RE: critique wanted - by loganwilliams - 01-14-2021, 12:54 AM
RE: critique wanted - by RonyaSekira - 01-21-2021, 03:20 AM

Forum Jump:


Users browsing this thread: 4 Guest(s)