Vandrake's sketchbook

[Zorrentos]

Good job on the last couple of pieces, but I still felt like there was a bit of room for improvement. I think you need to keep in mind your edges. Your works are full of hard edges, even in the corners of your canvas. This takes away from your focal point a bit.

I softened up the edges in the areas not in the focal point. I then added a dark vignette to the edges to further reinforce the contrast of the character's head. 

Afterward, I added a blue tint to all the colors to tie the color scheme together. I then added a bit of grain to smoothen out the brush strokes a tiny bit more.

Hope it helps! Keep up the good work! :)