04-19-2021, 04:11 AM
Thanks for dropping by my sketchbook! I like your style! It reminds me a lot of the independent comics I used to read in my younger years!
I feel like you could improve on readability in some of your panels. Even with a heavily stylized look, I feel like we as viewers should always be able to tell what the things are and what is going on. I made a small suggestion for you:
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I feel like you could improve on readability in some of your panels. Even with a heavily stylized look, I feel like we as viewers should always be able to tell what the things are and what is going on. I made a small suggestion for you:
![Filename: 1-2 overpaint.jpg
Size: 121 KB04-19-2021, 04:11 AM](attachments/121823/1-2 overpaint.jpg)