05-19-2021, 04:09 AM
Hiya, Thanks for stopping over my way and for the comment about value. I tried to put that to work in my latest.
Anyway - looked over the last two pages and thought you made excellent improvements as you went along on the knight.
Loving the composition on the mermaid image! Their figures / faces are well done and the background is awesome.
As Skeffin said they're a bit over-saturated at least on my screen and to my eye. Suggest using some atmospheric perspective to give them some depth like you did with the background. For example the tails are all about the same values.
Love that ship in the background and the way you highlighted it with the sky but suggest widening the body quite a bit. I've noticed that even old vessels like this one are actually quite wide when seen from the front or back.
Anyway — love what you're doing - keep it up!!
Anyway - looked over the last two pages and thought you made excellent improvements as you went along on the knight.
Loving the composition on the mermaid image! Their figures / faces are well done and the background is awesome.
As Skeffin said they're a bit over-saturated at least on my screen and to my eye. Suggest using some atmospheric perspective to give them some depth like you did with the background. For example the tails are all about the same values.
Love that ship in the background and the way you highlighted it with the sky but suggest widening the body quite a bit. I've noticed that even old vessels like this one are actually quite wide when seen from the front or back.
Anyway — love what you're doing - keep it up!!