sketchbook of kniv3s

[kniv3s]

Your using some principle of design but your make it to obvious for example the straight path the forest perfectly framing the rock.You also have to make the place look natural that an extra level of control chaos.

Keep going.I think you need more what i call secondary story that lead to the focal point.Like a bird on a tree,some leaf blowing in the wind some foot step those kind of element.

I also think that in term of foreground midground and background you made a to even split.You BG MG line fall almost at the center horizontally.

You also commit what i call the 2d tree linw wish mean you put your tree all on the same line to avoid dealing with the perspective don't do that it.

I see, thank you so much for pointing this all out! Will try to correct my mistakes with the next pic.