06-24-2021, 02:07 PM
Nice composition! I always think your drawings look really good, although we have rather different styles of painting. On this one the only thing I really see that I would change is to pretty much get rid of the line showing her boobs, since her dress and undergarments would kind of smooth that out. A line indicates a crease, like the dress is being pulled under her breast, instead of laying over it.
The other thing is that there's a twist in the guy's body where his pelvis is facing a different direction than the torso. You follow the reference pretty close, but since the armor is rigid, it creates a bit of a weird effect where the two halves of his body seem disconnected. If that makes any sense. I think what I would do is have his breast plate and ab armor face front a little more, that seems easiest, but maybe it's just me.
The other thing is that there's a twist in the guy's body where his pelvis is facing a different direction than the torso. You follow the reference pretty close, but since the armor is rigid, it creates a bit of a weird effect where the two halves of his body seem disconnected. If that makes any sense. I think what I would do is have his breast plate and ab armor face front a little more, that seems easiest, but maybe it's just me.