I need critique to get better.

[IronSkeleton09]

Do you have more finish work or more thing to show?This is still to limited of a sample to address specific issue.

Loomis - Figure Drawing For All It's Worth

is a good and common suggested book for figure drawing.But really it come down to what you want to draw that really what is missing in term of information you could provide use with for good book recommendation that would complement the one i suggested.

Sorry for the late answer, but that is one of my problems right now. I am not sure what I should do, something more realistic, cartoony or a combination of the two. If you have a book recommendation about this topic I would deeply appreciate it.