07-23-2021, 06:53 AM
Hi there! Nice seeing you learning the fundamentals. Regarding the last line drawing you posted. I don't how you intend to develop it further but i would definetly sudgest you to check the pose. Now it seems likes theres no anchor point to the figure, like the legs are flying off the ground and are not inline with the torso perspective. The structure is off is what I'm trying to say. I've attached a little drawing i did right beside your lineart. Maybe it will be helpfull. Cheers!