10-05-2021, 08:18 PM
I'm glad it was helpful!
I think your revision reads allot nicer without having had to do too much to it :)
with wonder woman, i think there's a couple of tangents worth putting some overlaps
the top of the sword guard I would bring up to break the shoulder line a bit and where the sword is coming close to her hip area, I would consider getting some overlap there.
also in terms of the mood it feel strange that shes looking slightly off somewhere.
Might feel more natural to have her looking down the sword a bit like in the reference.
good luck with the painting!
I think your revision reads allot nicer without having had to do too much to it :)
with wonder woman, i think there's a couple of tangents worth putting some overlaps
the top of the sword guard I would bring up to break the shoulder line a bit and where the sword is coming close to her hip area, I would consider getting some overlap there.
also in terms of the mood it feel strange that shes looking slightly off somewhere.
Might feel more natural to have her looking down the sword a bit like in the reference.
good luck with the painting!