12-11-2021, 03:46 AM
That's a really cool piece, man, and complex. The characters are very well drawn and proportioned. I see what darktiste is saying about turning the line-art into rimlight, but it works for me, personally.
The only thing that sticks out to me is the completely sharp edges on some of the shadow terminators (like on the pink lady's face and the blue lady's temple), but it looks like a side-effect of your technique rather than something intentional. If unintentional, I'd just watch for those more carefully and make sure the shadows are blended in a consistent way.
The only thing that sticks out to me is the completely sharp edges on some of the shadow terminators (like on the pink lady's face and the blue lady's temple), but it looks like a side-effect of your technique rather than something intentional. If unintentional, I'd just watch for those more carefully and make sure the shadows are blended in a consistent way.