12-12-2021, 04:10 AM
I really like your piece with the eyeball dudes in the forest! It's kinda cute, kinda creepy.
The portrait looks like a pretty good attempt to me! The proportions are pretty nice actually, except I would make the mouth a little bigger.
I suggest trying to make the shadow mass darker, and just keeping things massed together in general. Not just for the sake of contrast, but because you won't get the effect of a bright light from such a pale shadow. There's still tons of room to show whatever you want to on the shadow side.
The portrait looks like a pretty good attempt to me! The proportions are pretty nice actually, except I would make the mouth a little bigger.
I suggest trying to make the shadow mass darker, and just keeping things massed together in general. Not just for the sake of contrast, but because you won't get the effect of a bright light from such a pale shadow. There's still tons of room to show whatever you want to on the shadow side.