01-05-2022, 05:01 PM
Personally I like the pose and its drawn very well! also the concept of the pirate and mermaid is right up my street but i do see a couple things I could point out. The first thing i noticed was the crows nest of the ship in the back ground. It feels like this is too leaned over in relation to the horizon and bothers me a tad. I imagine the intention is the ship has been beached and is leaning to one side but I dont get that from the bow, maybe just revisit this perspective to get it nailed down.
The seagull on the bow needs to be a tad smaller I feel
On his boots, this might be a personal thing, but i would give the excess straps on each boot a bit more flair and not be so starch. Maybe a few curls would look good :) and possibly some fancy buckles too
bonus crit: if i had to carry the key around that is meant for that treasure chest it would be pulling my pants down for sure.
other than those nit picky things i would say full steam ahead, looks great! love seeing your work
The seagull on the bow needs to be a tad smaller I feel
On his boots, this might be a personal thing, but i would give the excess straps on each boot a bit more flair and not be so starch. Maybe a few curls would look good :) and possibly some fancy buckles too
bonus crit: if i had to carry the key around that is meant for that treasure chest it would be pulling my pants down for sure.
other than those nit picky things i would say full steam ahead, looks great! love seeing your work