01-19-2022, 04:15 AM
Really nice star to your sketch book. I see some great things you are doing that show a good foundation and understanding. The lighting on your android piece is well planned out and the treatment to the uniforms in your third piece are great and i can feel the weight of the fabric which is a hard to convey so nicely done.
I would echo a few of the tips that Darktiste brought as up he gave some very good feedback. small tips like thinking through your backgrounds earlier in your planning stage helps a lot later on. the missing legs on the 2nd character on the your third piece is unsettling now that i noticed it. Its not that you need better backgrounds because i like them, just need to clean up some of the tangent lines and missing elements that people will spot easily and might ruin all the great work you are doing in the focal image.
a small thing i do will do with some images i might not be sure about is show it to a non-artist and just ask them to describe what they see. if you are drawing a flying character and they a say i see something swimming under water then you can adjust. It can help at time but then again you might be asking the wrong person :)
I would echo a few of the tips that Darktiste brought as up he gave some very good feedback. small tips like thinking through your backgrounds earlier in your planning stage helps a lot later on. the missing legs on the 2nd character on the your third piece is unsettling now that i noticed it. Its not that you need better backgrounds because i like them, just need to clean up some of the tangent lines and missing elements that people will spot easily and might ruin all the great work you are doing in the focal image.
a small thing i do will do with some images i might not be sure about is show it to a non-artist and just ask them to describe what they see. if you are drawing a flying character and they a say i see something swimming under water then you can adjust. It can help at time but then again you might be asking the wrong person :)