02-01-2022, 05:20 AM
Looking good and with your paint skills it will be a strong piece, i would have to echo Darktiste sentiment that this pose is am ambitious one (the hip does need a little attention, letting her right leg to extend more and show more crotch would help sorry for the rough doodle of how i might approach this tricky hip and leg area, just for a second opinion only.) The good part of comic art is you can take more stylized liberties, which I'm totally cool with. That being said there are few small thing that caught my eye that might help.
first is she holding her whip? if so we should taper it a bit nore, right now it looks like she is emphatically mooring up her super yacht :)
Then the foreground hand bothers me a little. Right now it looks like a right hand on a left arm. I would suggest either dropping the thumb and moving to the back of the hand. OR rotate the hand a little more clockwise to compensate for the arm rotation
but in all great start I love her face, looking forward to your progress
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first is she holding her whip? if so we should taper it a bit nore, right now it looks like she is emphatically mooring up her super yacht :)
Then the foreground hand bothers me a little. Right now it looks like a right hand on a left arm. I would suggest either dropping the thumb and moving to the back of the hand. OR rotate the hand a little more clockwise to compensate for the arm rotation
but in all great start I love her face, looking forward to your progress