02-14-2022, 03:02 PM
hey great sketchbook
your art is improving a lot
you seem to have a good understanding of facial anatomy you've got some good rendering skills. one thing i would suggest is you use hard edges a bit more because your shading tends to look too soft/muddy at times which is a problem my art has as well
take a look at leyendeckers work to study the edges/shape design on his figure.
your darks are also too dark which make the painting look flatter so i would suggest thinking about that as well
overall admiring your improvement and decication
your art is improving a lot
you seem to have a good understanding of facial anatomy you've got some good rendering skills. one thing i would suggest is you use hard edges a bit more because your shading tends to look too soft/muddy at times which is a problem my art has as well
take a look at leyendeckers work to study the edges/shape design on his figure.
your darks are also too dark which make the painting look flatter so i would suggest thinking about that as well
overall admiring your improvement and decication