CGMythology's Sketchbook

[Jephyr]

That looks GREAT, George!  Congrats on another fine image. 

Those ellipses are much improved and the 'depth' in this one is so cool.

I do agree with dark that a little of that smoke in the foreground would be a nice touch.

Even though he's taking a resting pose it's still has a very intense feel because of the explosion 'aftermath' and his expression. The muscle definition on that suit across his arms and chest is quite good!

Another great piece!

A few small nits minor fixes if you're still open to them on this one:

I don't see any shadows under his feet. 

And you have mixed edges on the ones under him  - some have sharper edges and other are more diffused (which seem better IMHO).

Last nit (and I hope I don't drive you mad with all these late suggestions) but his LEFT foot looks a bit small (meaning the one to our right).  Sorry I didn't notice that before.

An easy fix would be to give it a little more length and extend it behind his weapon. 

Here's a hand foot comparison I found on an image search.  It doesn't give measurements or dimensions but it'd give you an idea of what I'm going on about. 




Anyway, each image you post is better than the last — and my small crits aside — this one is no exception.

I see you improving so much and I just what to add another set of eyes to your progress and help you on your way if I can!

Congrats on another PHENOMENAL piece!