CGMythology's Sketchbook

[Jephyr]

Hi George,

Excellent job on the changes.  I also like 'A' best too.

I have another suggestion or two and did another paint-over:

First, since you have a lot of foreground you could crop your image at the bottom and add some more room for the meteor shower at the top (unless you were planning to add detail to that lower area of course).

My paint-over is rushed — but should give you the idea — and you could play around with proportions.

Also I was looking at his left foot and seeing it twisted inward in an awkward way.  I tried to move my foot like that — with my knees wide open like his — and found it uncomfortable and really couldn't do it.

Anyway, I found a foot that approximated turning it to something more natural — thanks inspiration from Lydo's sketch and a foot study by irysching.
https://www.deviantart.com/irysching/art...-357038124




Hope these ideas help but either way, this is gonna be another fine piece, George!