CGMythology's Sketchbook

[JosephCow]

the link to the ref doesn't seem to work. :( is that just me?

cool drawing though! I don't really see any big problems with it, other than like Darktiste I kinda find the curve of the sword confusing.

One thing that I feel like would be nice to see in this drawing is more of a twist to the body, and a sense that one shoulder is really going behind him. I actually think the diagonal gesture of the pose works really well, but I think it would be enhanced by the right side of his abs and pectoral disappearing more since that part is stretching back away from us. But I feel like I see a lot of his right side as if there weren't much movement. Also the anatomy of the left shoulder could be more convincing, just how his arm connects to his collar bone and scapula. Idk what the ref looks like though.

Just stuff to think about. Being able to show that kind of thing can really take a painting from decent to amazing in my opinion. You seem to produce these fairly quickly, so it might be worth it to see how far you can really push it since it's not something you've already sunk like a month into or something.